She watched as her little one
played his innocent games
Passive, tired and faraway.
I wonder what went on
behind those shallow eyes
and that emotionless face.
Maybe she was just sick
of the shows on TV or
of her dull, small town place.
Maybe she thought
of her long lost dreams,
of promises made yesterday.
Probably waiting for nightfall
to end the drab day
Maybe she just wanted to run away.
3 comments:
Short but intense. leaves a lot to the readers imagination. Bravo!!! I bet many would have almost come close to the screen and got disappointed:)
KUDOS!!! Keep it rollin;)
i can totally relate this to someone very very dear to me.. i think u just touched a forbidden territory in my world.. keep writing!
soulful piece of writing ....not many get it right..... opened up a lost memory .....
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