Sunday, October 7, 2007

The unspoken

Filled to the brim,
Gleaming in the dark
Unspoken words
Lingered in the air
For me to hear.

The urge to write this
Springs from within me
Quite meaningless
When compared
To what they said.

Emotions conveyed
Through these deep lakes
So simple
Yet so profound
Can I ever respond?

Can I ever say
In a million words
What was said
When your eyes spoke.
It still keeps me awake.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

You know, I noticed that you are a sensitive emotional person with high spirits and a zeal to change the world. Good. Let it all come out. Let your soul bleed.

And, don't stress on rhyming, stress on getting the most true, the basest of your feelings out.

Anonymous said...

You can never say,
What lies behind every eye,
Even a million words would fail,
to describe that fragile feel.

Keep it rollin;)